Talk:Rodat

Hello F&F 2024 contributor! I began evaluating this article by running the text through my readability gizmo:[1] It yields an average of high middle school/…

Talk:Rodat


Hello F&F 2024 contributor! I began evaluating this article by running the text through my readability gizmo:[1] It yields an average of high middle school/low high school.

I see a few places where this could be simpler. "Reflections" has more than one possible meaning, so it might be best to choose a word with only one meaning. It's not clear whether just the princes or all four children are wearing white stockings.

If you need to triage your time and energy for the contest, I think this article needs less work than some of the other entries I've seen. Darkfrog24 (talk) 01:14, 25 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

What about Life lessons for reflections? Sometimes I'm stuck and can't think of simpler words—English not being my native language :). I've added "all," which makes it clearer that all four children wear white stockings. – Cyber.Eyes2005Talk 04:34, 25 February 2024 (UTC)Reply


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