Talk:October 7 attacks
Reasons for proposal of rewriting:
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Proposal of rewriting
Reasons for proposal of rewriting:
- Obvious formatting errors
- Fringe and poorly sourced claims
- Oversimplified content devoid of context
Steven1991 (talk) 17:38, 1 February 2025 (UTC)
Complexity / Refences..
Hello, this article has the two basic problems:
- If i only take the into, we are looking at a Flesch-Kincaid score of 26.4 (which corresponsds to a 'college graduate'). That's not what we want at Simple English Wikipedia.
- We are looking at an article of rouglhy 50kb. For this, we get less than 10 paragraphsa of actual text. The rest is tables, and references.
- I haven't looked at the bias in the article; but other articles by the same editor had an issue with being biased.
I have therefore added the {{complex}} and {{too many citations}} templates. Eptalon (talk) 11:46, 15 February 2026 (UTC)
- I cut down the references by removing tables that add little ot on information. I also started simplifying. The readability score is now at 51, which means 10th to 12 grade. I don't claim ownership of the article, anyone is free to add material. But if you do, please make sure it adds value to the article, and that it uses simple English. Things to look at would still be to clean up the references. Language can also be simplified further. Eptalon (talk) 13:07, 15 February 2026 (UTC)
What happened to October 7, 2023?
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